In general, I think my oral presentation wasnt really bad, but not really good either. I talked about the summer I worked at the animal home from Pro Gat.
I used a powerp

oint which was focussed on the topic. I think it was visual, because there were many photos and only a few sentences. It helped my presentation because it remembered me some important things. My presentation was 5:30 minutes long: the timing was allright.
Referring to my body language, I was looking at the audience, but mostly at the teacher, I don't really know why.. I read occasionally from my notes, but I think it wasn't too much. My gesture wasn't so good, it needs to improve.
My structure was right, I think: I ordered my ideas in order of importance (What is Pro Gat, what they do, some personal things that happened to me...) I use some discourse markers (On the other hand..)
I introduced a lot of new information to my audience: most of them didn't know I worked for Pro Gat a summer long and some didn't know what it is. I think it's clear, there was nothing too difficult. My information is completely original and based on my own experience.
I think my language, grammar and vocabulary is correct. I used verbe tenses que learnt in class, lie
used to. I used some linkers and pause fillers. Maybe I used a few pause fillers more than I should have used. I didn't check the pronunciation, because there weren't many new words for me and generally I knew how to pronounce them. I was thinking so much about what to say that I didn't really change my intonation. That was not so good. My speech was mostly fluent.
In conclusion, I should improve my gesture and intonation, the same happens with my eye contact. I forgot some little things and added others, but that wasn't so important. And I should try not to forget about my powerpoint next time!!
Here's my
literal transcription:
OK. Good morning everybody, Im Nicole, as you all know and today in this oral presentation I'm going to talk about the place I worked at in my summer holidays last
(summer) year. First of all I want to start with a question: do you all know Pro Gat? ... Who doesn't know? OK. It's aprivate organisation that takes care of homeless dogs and cats and tries to find them new homes. Ummm... They can be found here between Empuriabrava and Castelló and they have.. Well, when I started working they had 35 dogs and like 50 cats. Umm.. They didn't use to work for profit but only to help the animals, but people explained me that things seem to be changing a bit. I don't know. Well, I'd like to point out that the organisation lives only from donations from other people. Umm.. They can be found every Saturday morning at the market of Empuriabrava selling things other people donated: clothes, books, for example.
Umm.. Family and friends had told me a lot about them before I
(started working) decided that I wanted to help myself. Umm.. I went there to have a look and ask if they could need my help and later I realised that they could need every pair of hands they get. Umm... I didn't earn any money, it was completely voluntary, so I could go there or stay at home as I wanted, but I used to go... nearly every day, mornings and afternoons.
Umm.. Some personal things that happened to me were for example that I used to clean every day a specific enclosure - an enclosure is like a big cage - where lived six young German Shepherds. They were four months old, more or less and, as it is usual fo that
(little) young dogs, they always wanted to play and it was very difficult to go in and out there without being scratched or bitten accidentally or... well. Also, it was almost the same with the cats, because I used to go feed (them) or clean the cats' house,
(and) but it was even
(more) harder because there weren't only six cats, there were 20 in one og these houses! A second thing...
(I realised about the powerpoint, so I could say things I forgot etc.)
Errr.. Well, you can see here four dogs I used to play a lot with. These two are Olli and Stan, and up there is Sissy and Lobo. Umm.. Well, these are the young german shepherds I was talking about. Umm... yeah. I used to call them "monsters" but in a joking way. It was quite funny because many times they used to escape and I was always running after them. Umm.. These are some of the cats. As you can see here's the window and the wall of the cats' houses they were in and they had also a big cage outside, so they could in and out as they wanted.
Umm.. I'll always temember that little white dog. He was called Damm and in his life he got adopted from the animal home and returned three times, two of them in only two years. Afortunately, in December he got a new home where he still is and they told me that he's fine now.I also used to have kind of a favourite dog.. I know I shouldn't have had one because he wouldn't be mine, but.. don't know, he caught my attention from the first day. Er, his name was Zoro and he was very lucky because he only there for like... a month and he got adopted from a german pair and they went with him to Germany. I wans't sad because he was gone but I was very happy because I know he's much better now than he would be in the animal home here in Castelló.
On the other hand it makes me like a bit sad that there are still some of the animals I got to meet las year, waiting for someone to adopt them, like.. well, this is Lobo again and this is Scruffy. I got to meet them in July last year and I went there like two
(years) weeks ago and they were still there.
Umm.. Well, in conclusion, it was a time I really enjoyed and I've learnt a lot about taking care of animals and the responsibility it takes. Well, are there any questions?