Opinion Essay

I've decided to put my opinion essay in my blog because it's the writing I've learnt the most with. I got a better mark for the informal letter, but it was a lot easier to write for me, so I think the opinion essay is mor important.
Here it is:

We have almost learnt to respect our world. Do you agree?

I don’t agree with the idea that we have almost learnt to respect our world. In my opinion, our actions don’t reflect that.

It seems to me that some governments of different countries keep saying that we must respect Earth and nature, but they don’t do anything referring to that. They keep polluting waters and the atmosphere. Politicians talk a lot about pollution and promise to make it better, but in my opinion, they never did and never will.

Secondly, it may be true that some countries have reduced pollution a bit, but I don’t think it’s enough. In addition, nature needs our help to regenerate because we have destroyed too much of it. It isn’t able to get better by itself. So even if we have done something, it’s still not enough to help our planet and leave a better world for next generations.

To sum up, I would say that we shouldn’t say that we have almost learnt to respect our planet because our actions don’t make me think that. We need to act more like respecting Earth and nature and then maybe we will really learn to respect it.